I'm wanting feedback on this potential advertisement

Hi everyone,

I'm thinking this will be the template for advertising in the buildings around us. Any comments/suggestions?

Hans.

Hans Skariah, B.Sc., DMD
Promenade Court Dental Health Group in Mississauga
2233 Hurontario St., Mississauga, ON, Canada
(1/2 km north of the QEW in the Dome Building)
(905) 273-7100